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TOFATL Bleached Over Hearts 1

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The Orange Fox And The Lioness: Orders

It happened in a flash, the two unnamed bodies hitting the ground. Hinata Hyuuga didn't even blink as she whispered her incantation. Her lavender force fields overtook the destroyed remnants. A laugh-like snicker met her ears as she stood. A small smile was on the Arrancar's face as he rubbed the back of his head when she turned to him.

"You're still a strange girl, you know that? Taking care of someone clearly only just met."

"Wha--"

"Don't speak." A chill ran down her spine at how quick his voice changed. The light in his smile had all but vanished, his eyes darker than they should ever be. He was not the same as he once was. "You will walk with me. Reply any other way and I won't kill you--"

Images appeared behind him, like that of a television screen. Uchiha-san, Kiba-san, Konan-chan.

"But I will kill your "friends." His fake smile appeared again, as he slid his hands into his pockets. Still, she was locked with those iced over eyes that hadn't changed. "Don't ask anything, don't say anything. You don't have any rights in this situation. The only thing you have in this world now is the hand hovering over your comrades throats. That's all."

He gave another hollow laugh at her expression of fear. "You see, princess, this isn't a negotiation. It's an order."

Naruto stuck a finger in his ear absentmindedly. "Apparently Jiraya-sama has need of your power. I've been instructed to bring back unharmed. So I will repeat it one more time."

She hadn't even blinked but he was beside her, his mouth near her ear: "You will walk with me."

I started thinking about this last night, wondering how well I could translate characters from one series to another. This is the first result.
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Aleeight's avatar
It's will be interesting to see how the fact Naruto and Hinata taking the place of Bleach characters will change everything since Naruto and Hinata have their own unique dynamic. But, I am not a fan of the pairing they are taking the place of since Stockholm Syndrome is something I don't really like in pairings. Especially in NaruHina since it is such a positive pairing to begin with.

Though, this might be interesting if it becomes eventually the pairing that I love.

Wonderful writing by the way. I really should watch you so that I can see more of this. :D